What to do, What to do.

My story needs a major rethink, it seems to be a bit all over the place at the moment. I put this down to the fact im trying to fit it around the images i already have rather than just starting again. My original story board looked like this: 

But i revised that to fit it better with the things i ended up drawing:

So now i think its got a bit too complicated so im going to strip it back to the bone and try a much more simple story with a short story arc. If i can i will include some of the animations iv already done but i wont try to crowbar them in when they are not needed. The story will be about a man who wants something but is physically and/or mentally incapable of getting it. i will clarify all this later.